Zero-
I found your history quite... "interesting." I am fairly new in the
realms, and I did not even know that at one time you had been with the
Paladins, or with the Infernals, for that matter. It is, overall,
very well written in my opinion. My only complaint is that in Chapter 6,
it says that the Priest's angel began to bare down on you, instead of
bear down. It is also very touching, really... Although I really don't
understand what you meant when you said that Maran began instituting
all sorts of strange rules... I think that that should've been elaborated
smite little bit more. I'm just glad that Justice is present in the Realms
today... *shudder* I had had no idea that Miramar treated anyone unfairly.

Penned by my hand on the 25th of Phaestian, in the year 270 AF.