I would correct you.

You see, this story is about a man trapped inside the box. Refusing to
adapt, refusing to innovate, with a narrow mind staring at a single
solution. A weak mind.

The man was weak and he perished. Your story is riddled with more
fractures than the wall this man built. Perhaps you should examine your
beliefs more closely before posting another fragile tale.

Father Carmain Fol'ia,
Messiah of the Damned

Penned by my hand on the 25th of Miraman, in the year 602 AF.