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Public News Post #1868

Everyone else is making one, so i think i'll take a shot at it!

Written by: Malak
Date: Tuesday, April 20th, 1999
Addressed to: Everyone


Hey Hey everyone! Just thought i would show off my poor poetic skills and see how ya like it!
I would like to call this poem, Empty.
I stand here, as broken as a board
My mind feels like I just strayed from the horde
My thoughts are racing, i haven't a clue
How to take, the next day through
I look at the key, the one that is all
The only thing left to unlock the hull
How far can i go, How long will it last
The feelings inside me are fading away fast
Feeling the pain, it surges up and down
There's no way to leave it alone on the ground

There's a place inside me, a place i like to go
A place that's hard and cold, i travel to and fro
The place is very empty, save for me at last
I grovel in the corner, getting nowhere fast

She helped me get into this, eternal hell i'm in
Ruining my life, tossed into a bin
She shuns me like no one, has ever shunned before
I regret ever, meeting her before
She opened up the place inside me, a place i hate to go
I cannot escape the place, and she is why it's so

There's a place inside me, a place of eternal greed
A place that's soft and warm, i like to pay my heed
The place is very full, of temptations for everyone
I huddle in the corner, everything i scorn

Well that's all! I hope you guys enjoyed my poem, if ya have any questions, i'm always here and if i'm not, just message me!
Malak <has not title *sticks tongues out*>

Penned by my hand on the 17th of Scarlatan, in the year 217 AF.


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Public News Post #1868

Everyone else is making one, so i think i'll take a shot at it!

Written by: Malak
Date: Tuesday, April 20th, 1999
Addressed to: Everyone


Hey Hey everyone! Just thought i would show off my poor poetic skills and see how ya like it!
I would like to call this poem, Empty.
I stand here, as broken as a board
My mind feels like I just strayed from the horde
My thoughts are racing, i haven't a clue
How to take, the next day through
I look at the key, the one that is all
The only thing left to unlock the hull
How far can i go, How long will it last
The feelings inside me are fading away fast
Feeling the pain, it surges up and down
There's no way to leave it alone on the ground

There's a place inside me, a place i like to go
A place that's hard and cold, i travel to and fro
The place is very empty, save for me at last
I grovel in the corner, getting nowhere fast

She helped me get into this, eternal hell i'm in
Ruining my life, tossed into a bin
She shuns me like no one, has ever shunned before
I regret ever, meeting her before
She opened up the place inside me, a place i hate to go
I cannot escape the place, and she is why it's so

There's a place inside me, a place of eternal greed
A place that's soft and warm, i like to pay my heed
The place is very full, of temptations for everyone
I huddle in the corner, everything i scorn

Well that's all! I hope you guys enjoyed my poem, if ya have any questions, i'm always here and if i'm not, just message me!
Malak <has not title *sticks tongues out*>

Penned by my hand on the 17th of Scarlatan, in the year 217 AF.


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