While I still don't think too highly of Jack, the following
come to my attention while reading your post-

o 1. You use `attempt` too much. Stop being redundant.
o 2. You are not the assassin, do not assume his thoughts.
o 3. It's easy for stupid people to laugh Guiliaume.
o 4. While I don't like most of them, the Warlocks aren't weak.
o 5. If they -are- so weak and incapable of holding the claim,
who's going to `rise up and strike them down`, you? That would be
amusing - to say the least, then I would have to retract number four.
o 6. And lastly, with -all- due respects, remove your lips from
the Sultan's end quarters, city favours aren't worth 1000 gold in
Shallam. Just sleep with one of the ruling council members, that's
how politics work around there.


ZS

Penned by my hand on the 22nd of Lupar, in the year 280 AF.