Aecius,

Your whining for being enemied combined with an overly defensive post is
somewhat amusing, but the details of the story lack originality. You
might want to work on that! Change the part where you lied to gain
entrance to the House estate into something like an epic battle with a
thousand guards, using your bare hands. And instead of arguing over a
verbal agreement you broke, forge a document that supports you and post
it up. Add in a few attacks by the Crown Merchants against your Lord's
Temple on top of that, and it might be fiction worth reading.

Trevize Moonflair

Penned by my hand on the 8th of Lupar, in the year 491 AF.