Interesting Synopsis, I did read the codex and find the first page did
not contain any dust or fluff at all though! It may of been blown away
by the many confused people grabbing said book, ruffling the pages
quickly and saying "THEY SAID WHAT??" But i'm not sure.

Page three, definition of good. Now i'm not much for grudges, but it
looks rather similar to the interpretations of benevolence, thus being
more than bashing anothers skull in to make him less evil. An excellent
move forwards! It makes a change to know i'm not commiting a sin in the
eyes of the church when I try and convince someone doing something evil,
say thieving to stop in other ways than beating the very kidneys out of
him. I thank you Church! I feel honoured by that.

But you seem to of jumped on a bit futher on page for, this part seems
to have some marks of slight disbelief on it. I wasn't sure you could
wear down paper until now. But it, as you say seems to declare that the
ends justify the means. This would be the Church that is part of a city
that has had another two cities who should rightfully hate each other,
join up to try blowing the place up (Before the cities of Mhaldor and
Ashtan get riled, I understand it, that you are merely tricking each
other into it to further your own purposes, don't worry! The secret is
safe with me!) Yet it now feels that, perhaps there is no more mr nice
church? Is this the doorway to privateering thieves, hired by the
church? Men in big suits saying "Mr Archprelate is awfully upset" to
people who haven't payed the "be good" bills?

As I understood in the first book, they way anyone else interpreted good
was instantly bad, which has been rather confusing to Cyrene. We must of
been bad people before this book in general, suddenly we're good, but
we're not doing enough! My my, how are we to keep up with the progress
of this organisation dedicated towards that mythical light stuff.

It's still far, far, far, far more reasonable than the Apocripple thing.
Scathing, lukewarm wit aside. Re-write the thing Mhaldor! You have two
gods to guide you into glory now it appears. If they are as half what
Lord Sartan was you should be fine right?

To those cities, organisations and clubs not running on one religious
dogma to guide them. Hi there, how is that working out so far? No
flaming fire from the sky yet, good stuff!

--Finchy

Penned by my hand on the 17th of Aeguary, in the year 424 AF.