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Poetry News Post #1956

Enraptured

Written by: The Watcher, Rikeshar "Keepsmore" Kaimelar
Date: Sunday, July 18th, 2004
Addressed to: Penguin Prankster Tomay, Queen of Hugs


Her eyes glowed with an unatural flame
Her beauty transfixed me upon first sight
Choirs of Seraphim proclaimed her name
And her smile banished the deep dark night
Could it be real, this most heavenly sight?
I somehow knew my eyes did not deceive
But my mind told me that this couldn't be right
It told me that this was just a reprieve
But behold! How my heart did not believe!
My thoughts were rapidly stolen by her
Enraptured so, my soul could not conceive
This feeling that had caused my world to blur
The feeling sent from our dear God above
The one we mortals comprehend as love.


(Spenserian Sonnet in Iambic Pentameter)

Penned by my hand on the 24th of Lupar, in the year 368 AF.


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Poetry News Post #1956

Enraptured

Written by: The Watcher, Rikeshar "Keepsmore" Kaimelar
Date: Sunday, July 18th, 2004
Addressed to: Penguin Prankster Tomay, Queen of Hugs


Her eyes glowed with an unatural flame
Her beauty transfixed me upon first sight
Choirs of Seraphim proclaimed her name
And her smile banished the deep dark night
Could it be real, this most heavenly sight?
I somehow knew my eyes did not deceive
But my mind told me that this couldn't be right
It told me that this was just a reprieve
But behold! How my heart did not believe!
My thoughts were rapidly stolen by her
Enraptured so, my soul could not conceive
This feeling that had caused my world to blur
The feeling sent from our dear God above
The one we mortals comprehend as love.


(Spenserian Sonnet in Iambic Pentameter)

Penned by my hand on the 24th of Lupar, in the year 368 AF.


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